Pitch Preparation - Feedback

After presenting our pitch to our fellow classmates we had some positive feedback and constructive criticism. Some good points are as follows:

•  they liked the idea of the colour scheme, and including black and white
• we had a clear view of our initial ideas and what we wanted to include
• we had a good audience review, as we included at the bottom of the presentation why the audience would enjoy our music video
• we're already thinking about the lyrics and how we can link them to the visuals, such as the flash boards with lyrics on
• we had a good idea of mise-en-scene and editing techniques including black and white, and slow motion

Constructive criticism included:

• we need to think about continuity within our location choices
• we also need to consider transitions
• we need to use the correct terminology such as 'direct address' - when someone is talking to the camera
• and we also need to consider risk assessment when on location